Winter's Soliloquy and Redbox in UK
Had a drinking plus singing fest tonight and inspiration dropped by, so here's Winter's Soliloquy as promised:
Winter's Soliloquy
Cold Wisps of snowflakes
Caressing me Lovingly
Seeps my Life away
And the following is Thomas' work 5 mins later after I finished the previous poem and explained to him what a Haiku was:
Redbox in UK
Myriads of vocals
resonate in the drunk air
Red Box in UK
He makes a great poet :D
(P.S. Winter's Soliloquy and Redbox In UK are our first Haiku(s), so please bear with us. And criticisms are welcomed)